As of September, I will go through this account, backing up what is necessary and deleting what I no longer want to be there. I have no idea how big this bloodbath will be. I can only say that I hold nothing here sacred and, at least for now, I feel it may be a lot. So, fair warning is given. If, for some unfathomable reason, there is something here you sure want to keep, better consider downloading or copying it. As of September, it may be gone at some point. That's all. You can go on with your day now. Have fun.
List of problems to be solved for a good rewrite. by Walt-Marsters, literature
Literature
List of problems to be solved for a good rewrite.
The motivation for the destruction of the Adler family. I like the vampire involvement, but find her core motivation a bit weak. Add the struggle for the throne to it? Falco's origin as the avatar of Ragnarok, or Hyrvaen Skemdar and the essence of this being as well. Throughout the stories, the nature of this 'chosen one' actually gradually changed, from the one ending the eternal war for any of the main races, to the one destined to bring the threat of the Demons to a conclusion. Asharan was supposed to be the One, but he failed because of Orcfang's machinations. How do I make this work with the prophecy, the elven soul, etc... Falco's necklace. I always liked the idea, and it helped him survive because of healing properties. However, the 'concealing' property was a bit weak, and I can't find another reason why orcs or goblins wouldn't have confiscared otherwise. And it's rather unlikely he would be able to hide it. How to fix that? Bondbreaker the Sword. No doubt, this sword needs
A small, but wild stream flowed by the base of a steep, almost vertical rock wall. It was one of countless little rivers that had their source in the Fire Mountains and fed the young and impetuous River Geirrod quite some distance away to the south of the mighty city of Utgard. In times of heavy rains or exceptional melting of snow up in the mountains, the water reached all the way to the rock wall. That, however, was not the case now, and Claw, standing on the narrow strip of dry, rocky land between water and wall, was quite happy with that. He steadied his breath, after the long run from the ancient, ruined temple to his hidden cave and then to this northern stronghold and looked up. It was a long climb, over rocks nobody deemed possible to climb, and once again he wondered why he had agreed to this. But then, he could also ask himself why it wasn’t the first time he had stood at the base of this rock, studying it, noticing the cracks and edges, and concluding that it was not as
Today I posted the final chapter in not only 'The War of Ragnarok' novel but also the entire Ragnarok series. It was supposed to be one chapter, but it got so big, it had to become a three parter, from chapters 52-54. This concludes the adventures of my main protagonist Falco Adler, aka Claw, in my own setting in the world of Yorden, which took me more than 8 years to conclude.
And with this final chapter also ends my writing on DA. No more stories or attempts at novels will be posted here. At least not for the foreseeabele future. I'm not too good at the whole social media stuff, never even set up a facebook account and always stayed clear
