I finally did it! I was beginning to despair, but I finally managed to revise and edit Book 2 of Falco's Saga. It is finished!!
And you can find it here:
This volume contains everything that you can find in the "Utgard" chapters as well as most that was written in the "Meanwhile in Griffnar" map.
The second book continues where the first book ended and tells the tale of Falco's adventures and misadventures as a slave in Utgard. At the same time it recounts the terrible events that are taking place back at his home city.
I have also added several chapters that have never been posted on DA before and I edited the stories here and there, to bring them more in line with what has been established about "Claw" in the later storylines.
Finally, I also added illustrations by the great artist jackcrowder (Yay!!), with his kind permission, and by myself (Boo!! Hiss!!). Sorry about that last bit.
Anyway, I hope you like it. Any feedback, preferably constructive, is welcome.
On to revising and editing book 3 now.